One important aspect to include are plenty of descriptive words. Throughout these stories, the way that the streams, meadows, and flowers were described really made me feel more connected to the story. It is one thing to just be able to describe an event or story, but it is another to make the audience feel. I would also consider bringing in this aspect of how beauty in both art and nature causes one to feel emotions that are usually sparked by other events. As science and technology advances, many move away from the arts. While it is very common to have a favorite movie or preferred Netflix series, it is uncommon for people my age to have a favorite play, novel, artist, or particular piece of art. I hope to draw on this as my story telling progresses.
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Bibliography: Public Domain Ramayana: Link to read online
I also noted the influence that nature had on each of the stories. My personal stories from this part of the Ramayana incorporated this imagery and focus on nature. I personified the plants and flowers. It makes the stories feel so serene. I like how you pointed out the parallels between nature and natures influence on human decisions. The descriptions of the gardens and meadows really made me want to visit the areas in person although it was a story; however, even thought it is a story for entertainment, I do believe that some of its viewpoints and aspects are influenced by real events.
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